I am waffling between coming from inside the father's head and omniescent third person. Like I said, I thought I might just use scene breaks between pure narration and action/dialogue/thoughts, but that would probably make it unwieldy...
Will definitely show you when I am done. Thank you for your input, this is helping quite a lot.
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Date: 2005-03-17 02:55 am (UTC)Will definitely show you when I am done. Thank you for your input, this is helping quite a lot.